Mind penetrates breath, till speech no longer a gift--
Entrails of your touch, your being rubbed off onto..
Pale skin beneath moonlight's kiss,
Oh what you've done to me..
Heart moving in dolphin-like oceanic speed--
Until intersection of dreams crash this--
Stain-painted euphoria.
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Sweet! I like the "dolphin-like oceanic speed" (very original!) and I LOVE the "intersection of dreams" and the sounds of "stain-painted euphoria." I think I like the idea behind "mind penetrates breath" but it's not quite clear what it means. You might be able to add just a couple words to make that idea even stronger? "Stain-painted euphoria... stain-painted euphoria..." I could just say that over and over. :)
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